Hi guys, can you please help me correct this text? Thank you. 9. What influence does the broadcast media have on our lives? * Increasing number of channels * Coverage of world news * Entertainment and celebrities. Generally speaking, I would say that ther (2024)

Question

Updated on

Paola1087

5 Jul 2019

  • Spanish (Mexico)

0 pts

3.07K

121

Quality Point(s)

Question

Like

  • English (US)

Question about English (US)

Answers

Hi guys, can you please help me correct this text? Thank you. 9. What influence does the broadcast media have on our lives? * Increasing number of channels * Coverage of world news * Entertainment and celebrities. Generally speaking, I would say that there is no denying that the media has a pivotal role in our lives. First and foremost, I would like to mention coverage of world news. It goes without saying that nowadays a lot of information about the events that happen around the world is available. For instance, towards the Internet we can find a myriad of websites that allow us to be updated of the most important events in real time. Furthermore, we can watch news in television and it is highly likely that not only local news, but also international news are dealt with. Not to mention the physical newspapers. Another point worth a mention is celebrities. They have hordes of followers who can be influenced by them. For instance, were a famous actor to support a politician, it is highly likely that his fans would be persuaded for his decision. Another example that pops into my head is how women favor products sponsored by celebrities. Were an actress campaign a brand of shampoo, it is highly likely that most of the purchases are related with the advertisem*nts. As far as channels are concerned, I would say that each day more and more channels arouse. What we will find is that a variety of programs are broadcast daily. Nowadays, one kind of program that has widespread popularity is reality shows. Viewers are hooked on these programs, because not only do they feel identify with the contestants, who by and large are common people, but also because they display the likelihood of become famous overnight. The other side of the coin is that on many occasions the information is biased, thus we need to be cautous and take what we read or watch with a pinch of salt. Moreover, we should consult reliable sites in order to avoid misunderstandings. To sum up, I would say that there is virtually no doubt about the importance of mass media in our lives. (2)

When you "disagree" with an answer

The owner of it will not be notified.Only the user who asked this question will see who disagreed with this answer.

OK

Read more comments

Knightmer3

5 Jul 2019

Knightmer3

5 Jul 2019

  • English (US)

89 pts

67

31

Quality Point(s)

Answer

Like

let me say that you have a pretty clear level of English and I can understand you pretty well , however I did find a few mistakes and wrote them in big letters along with their sentences so you can easily find them 😁

ON the internet we can find

allow us to be updated ABOUT the most important

we can watch THE news ON television

another point worth MENTIONING is celebrities

would be persuaded BY his decision

not only do they identify (delete feel)
or : do they feel they can identify with

they display the likelihood of BECOMING famous overnight

CAUTIOUS( forgot I)

Hi guys, can you please help me correct this text? Thank you. 9. What influence does the broadcast media have on our lives? * Increasing number of channels * Coverage of world news * Entertainment and celebrities. Generally speaking, I would say that there is no denying that the media has a pivotal role in our lives. First and foremost, I would like to mention coverage of world news. It goes without saying that nowadays a lot of information about the events that happen around the world is available. For instance, towards the Internet we can find a myriad of websites that allow us to be updated of the most important events in real time. Furthermore, we can watch news in television and it is highly likely that not only local news, but also international news are dealt with. Not to mention the physical newspapers. Another point worth a mention is celebrities. They have hordes of followers who can be influenced by them. For instance, were a famous actor to support a politician, it is highly likely that his fans would be persuaded for his decision. Another example that pops into my head is how women favor products sponsored by celebrities. Were an actress campaign a brand of shampoo, it is highly likely that most of the purchases are related with the advertisem*nts. As far as channels are concerned, I would say that each day more and more channels arouse. What we will find is that a variety of programs are broadcast daily. Nowadays, one kind of program that has widespread popularity is reality shows. Viewers are hooked on these programs, because not only do they feel identify with the contestants, who by and large are common people, but also because they display the likelihood of become famous overnight. The other side of the coin is that on many occasions the information is biased, thus we need to be cautous and take what we read or watch with a pinch of salt. Moreover, we should consult reliable sites in order to avoid misunderstandings. To sum up, I would say that there is virtually no doubt about the importance of mass media in our lives. (6)

Was this answer helpful?

Paola1087

5 Jul 2019

  • Spanish (Mexico)

0 pts

121

Quality Point(s)

Answer

Like

Hi guys, can you please help me correct this text? Thank you. 9. What influence does the broadcast media have on our lives? * Increasing number of channels * Coverage of world news * Entertainment and celebrities. Generally speaking, I would say that there is no denying that the media has a pivotal role in our lives. First and foremost, I would like to mention coverage of world news. It goes without saying that nowadays a lot of information about the events that happen around the world is available. For instance, towards the Internet we can find a myriad of websites that allow us to be updated of the most important events in real time. Furthermore, we can watch news in television and it is highly likely that not only local news, but also international news are dealt with. Not to mention the physical newspapers. Another point worth a mention is celebrities. They have hordes of followers who can be influenced by them. For instance, were a famous actor to support a politician, it is highly likely that his fans would be persuaded for his decision. Another example that pops into my head is how women favor products sponsored by celebrities. Were an actress campaign a brand of shampoo, it is highly likely that most of the purchases are related with the advertisem*nts. As far as channels are concerned, I would say that each day more and more channels arouse. What we will find is that a variety of programs are broadcast daily. Nowadays, one kind of program that has widespread popularity is reality shows. Viewers are hooked on these programs, because not only do they feel identify with the contestants, who by and large are common people, but also because they display the likelihood of become famous overnight. The other side of the coin is that on many occasions the information is biased, thus we need to be cautous and take what we read or watch with a pinch of salt. Moreover, we should consult reliable sites in order to avoid misunderstandings. To sum up, I would say that there is virtually no doubt about the importance of mass media in our lives. (13)

[News] Hey you! The one learning a language!Do you know how to improve your language skills❓ All you have to do is have your writing corrected by a native speaker!With HiNative, you can have your writing corrected by both native speakers and AI 📝✨.Sign up

Hi guys, can you please help me correct this text? Thank you. 9. What influence does the broadcast media have on our lives? * Increasing number of channels * Coverage of world news * Entertainment and celebrities. Generally speaking, I would say that there is no denying that the media has a pivotal role in our lives. First and foremost, I would like to mention coverage of world news. It goes without saying that nowadays a lot of information about the events that happen around the world is available. For instance, towards the Internet we can find a myriad of websites that allow us to be updated of the most important events in real time. Furthermore, we can watch news in television and it is highly likely that not only local news, but also international news are dealt with. Not to mention the physical newspapers. Another point worth a mention is celebrities. They have hordes of followers who can be influenced by them. For instance, were a famous actor to support a politician, it is highly likely that his fans would be persuaded for his decision. Another example that pops into my head is how women favor products sponsored by celebrities. Were an actress campaign a brand of shampoo, it is highly likely that most of the purchases are related with the advertisem*nts. As far as channels are concerned, I would say that each day more and more channels arouse. What we will find is that a variety of programs are broadcast daily. Nowadays, one kind of program that has widespread popularity is reality shows. Viewers are hooked on these programs, because not only do they feel identify with the contestants, who by and large are common people, but also because they display the likelihood of become famous overnight. The other side of the coin is that on many occasions the information is biased, thus we need to be cautous and take what we read or watch with a pinch of salt. Moreover, we should consult reliable sites in order to avoid misunderstandings. To sum up, I would say that there is virtually no doubt about the importance of mass media in our lives. (15)

Related questions

  • Hi guys, can you please help me correct this text? Thank you110. What role does the media pla...
  • Hi guys, can you please help me correct this text? Thank you42. What are the strengths and we...

Similar questions

  • Hi, I'd like to ask a question about American culture. I'm now analyzing a notion "American house...
  • What is the difference between Hi everyone! and Hi there! ?
  • Which What's up ! sounds the most natural?

Recommended Questions

  • Show more
  • What does *fandango* mean ? ? ? https://youtu.be/VZqPoriYXho?t=31We skipped the light *fandan...
  • I really like your photos. Can you take pictures of my boyfriend's car? You know, I really wanna ...
  • Hey guys! I have a question.There is to be done. Is this sentence grammatically correct?Tha...
  • Insulating executives with layers of gofers is passé. Even Pat makes and answers all his phone ca...
  • Which one is more common in American English:1. We have lived here for ten years.2. We li...

Topic Questions

  • Show more
  • What does "hardly put a dent in his money" mean?⬇️Thanks to his habit of thriftness, over a mont...
  • Teknisk dokumentationHur kan en teknisk översättningsbyrå säkerställa att översatt teknisk doku...
  • It can be such a hassle to go through customs and immigration, exchange money, confront strange f...
  • Could anyone please help me?Does this sound natural?Some people say operating prisons is expen...
  • In a magazine or video interview of a celebrity or other person, there is sometimes a list of sho...

Newest Questions

  • Show more
  • "I called my manager and told him I couldn't work on the day I was supposed to work. He was angry...
  • Does this sound natural?She was planning to set up her business in Seoul.
  • Can 'take a nap' used to describe a short sleep at any time of a day? Or just in the afternoon?
  • what did she say after saying "hold on, I didn't~ "?(the second sentence)
  • What did the kids say before "John Cena!" in this video? https://youtu.be/avLvyxdvgk4?t=31

Previous question/ Next question

  • How do you say this in French (France)? I am looking for people to talk with
  • What does Nhưng gặp anh em thật sự tin tưởng Đúng có rất nhiều người đàn ông thích và mời em . n...

Hi guys, can you please help me correct this text? Thank you. 9. What influence does the broadcast media have on our lives? * Increasing number of channels * Coverage of world news * Entertainment and celebrities. Generally speaking, I would say that there is no denying that the media has a pivotal role in our lives. First and foremost, I would like to mention coverage of world news. It goes without saying that nowadays a lot of information about the events that happen around the world is available. For instance, towards the Internet we can find a myriad of websites that allow us to be updated of the most important events in real time. Furthermore, we can watch news in television and it is highly likely that not only local news, but also international news are dealt with. Not to mention the physical newspapers. Another point worth a mention is celebrities. They have hordes of followers who can be influenced by them. For instance, were a famous actor to support a politician, it is highly likely that his fans would be persuaded for his decision. Another example that pops into my head is how women favor products sponsored by celebrities. Were an actress campaign a brand of shampoo, it is highly likely that most of the purchases are related with the advertisem*nts. As far as channels are concerned, I would say that each day more and more channels arouse. What we will find is that a variety of programs are broadcast daily. Nowadays, one kind of program that has widespread popularity is reality shows. Viewers are hooked on these programs, because not only do they feel identify with the contestants, who by and large are common people, but also because they display the likelihood of become famous overnight. The other side of the coin is that on many occasions the information is biased, thus we need to be cautous and take what we read or watch with a pinch of salt. Moreover, we should consult reliable sites in order to avoid misunderstandings. To sum up, I would say that there is virtually no doubt about the importance of mass media in our lives. (16)What’s this symbol?

The Language Level symbol shows a user's proficiency in the languages they're interested in. Setting your Language Level helps other users provide you with answers that aren't too complex or too simple.

  • Beginner

    Has difficulty understanding even short answers in this language.

  • Beginner-Intermediate

    Can ask simple questions and can understand simple answers.

  • Intermediate

    Can ask all types of general questions and can understand longer answers.

  • Advanced

    Can understand long, complex answers.

Hi guys, can you please help me correct this text? Thank you. 9. What influence does the broadcast media have on our lives? * Increasing number of channels * Coverage of world news * Entertainment and celebrities. Generally speaking, I would say that there is no denying that the media has a pivotal role in our lives. First and foremost, I would like to mention coverage of world news. It goes without saying that nowadays a lot of information about the events that happen around the world is available. For instance, towards the Internet we can find a myriad of websites that allow us to be updated of the most important events in real time. Furthermore, we can watch news in television and it is highly likely that not only local news, but also international news are dealt with. Not to mention the physical newspapers. Another point worth a mention is celebrities. They have hordes of followers who can be influenced by them. For instance, were a famous actor to support a politician, it is highly likely that his fans would be persuaded for his decision. Another example that pops into my head is how women favor products sponsored by celebrities. Were an actress campaign a brand of shampoo, it is highly likely that most of the purchases are related with the advertisem*nts. As far as channels are concerned, I would say that each day more and more channels arouse. What we will find is that a variety of programs are broadcast daily. Nowadays, one kind of program that has widespread popularity is reality shows. Viewers are hooked on these programs, because not only do they feel identify with the contestants, who by and large are common people, but also because they display the likelihood of become famous overnight. The other side of the coin is that on many occasions the information is biased, thus we need to be cautous and take what we read or watch with a pinch of salt. Moreover, we should consult reliable sites in order to avoid misunderstandings. To sum up, I would say that there is virtually no doubt about the importance of mass media in our lives. (17)

Sign up for premium, and you can play other user's audio/video answers.

Learn about premium features

What are gifts?

Show your appreciation in a way that likes and stamps can't.

By sending a gift to someone, they will be more likely to answer your questions again!

Hi guys, can you please help me correct this text? Thank you. 9. What influence does the broadcast media have on our lives? * Increasing number of channels * Coverage of world news * Entertainment and celebrities. Generally speaking, I would say that there is no denying that the media has a pivotal role in our lives. First and foremost, I would like to mention coverage of world news. It goes without saying that nowadays a lot of information about the events that happen around the world is available. For instance, towards the Internet we can find a myriad of websites that allow us to be updated of the most important events in real time. Furthermore, we can watch news in television and it is highly likely that not only local news, but also international news are dealt with. Not to mention the physical newspapers. Another point worth a mention is celebrities. They have hordes of followers who can be influenced by them. For instance, were a famous actor to support a politician, it is highly likely that his fans would be persuaded for his decision. Another example that pops into my head is how women favor products sponsored by celebrities. Were an actress campaign a brand of shampoo, it is highly likely that most of the purchases are related with the advertisem*nts. As far as channels are concerned, I would say that each day more and more channels arouse. What we will find is that a variety of programs are broadcast daily. Nowadays, one kind of program that has widespread popularity is reality shows. Viewers are hooked on these programs, because not only do they feel identify with the contestants, who by and large are common people, but also because they display the likelihood of become famous overnight. The other side of the coin is that on many occasions the information is biased, thus we need to be cautous and take what we read or watch with a pinch of salt. Moreover, we should consult reliable sites in order to avoid misunderstandings. To sum up, I would say that there is virtually no doubt about the importance of mass media in our lives. (18)

If you post a question after sending a gift to someone, your question will be displayed in a special section on that person’s feed.

Hi guys, can you please help me correct this text? Thank you. 9. What influence does the broadcast media have on our lives? * Increasing number of channels * Coverage of world news * Entertainment and celebrities. Generally speaking, I would say that ther (2024)
Top Articles
Latest Posts
Article information

Author: Fr. Dewey Fisher

Last Updated:

Views: 6171

Rating: 4.1 / 5 (62 voted)

Reviews: 85% of readers found this page helpful

Author information

Name: Fr. Dewey Fisher

Birthday: 1993-03-26

Address: 917 Hyun Views, Rogahnmouth, KY 91013-8827

Phone: +5938540192553

Job: Administration Developer

Hobby: Embroidery, Horseback riding, Juggling, Urban exploration, Skiing, Cycling, Handball

Introduction: My name is Fr. Dewey Fisher, I am a powerful, open, faithful, combative, spotless, faithful, fair person who loves writing and wants to share my knowledge and understanding with you.